I reedited my book series all in one night so what do you think?

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the link above was my previous plan





Book One: Death Comes To Town- Brooke Wyatt leaves the town of New York for some peace and moves to the town of Riverview to be with her sister, Jill. When she gets their she strikes a friendship with her sister's roommate Alexz. One mysterious night her sister goes missing and the two's search leads them to unexpected love and secrets that wont stay dead. But someone is watching their every move and sets them up for a deadly game of cat and mouse.



Book Two : Secrets Of The Dead- When Brooke and Alex find Jill dead and come with an encounter with her murderer from the previous book they burn her down in a warehouse during their fight.Brooke now having no family as she never met her mother and her father dead she begins feeling alone. Now with summer over, Brooke heads to high school as a senior and Alex becoming a inspiring actress. Then Brooke gets sent burned newspaper clippings that date over 20 years ago.

( This book will feature no deaths but more mystery)



Book Three: Three's A Charm. Brooke pieces all the newspaper clippings together. The pieces lead to a dead teenager named " Carrie Stevens". She and her new friend Eve begin their obsessive journey on finding out who this girl is. Elsewhere Alexz begins taping her show in Miami but during a filming what they thought was fake becomes reality. Someone has followed her to Miami and wants her dead.



Book 4: Scream for Me 4 Times. Part One ( This book will be the turning point as i planned it out to be similar to the Scream Film Series. As their have been no film to book to remake i might be the first to do this.)

Secret we all have some dont we. Brooke reveals why she left New York. Eve is pregnant by her lover. Alexz wanted Jill dead so she would become the lead on the show.( Jill had worked with Alexz on the show.)

Brooke is being stalked by some stranger, Alexz career begins fading away when she meets Officer Riley and bond. Eve's end of the year party is killer when someone crashes in.



Book 4 Part Two: Scream Till We Die. Eve is found dead and Brooke leaves Riverview only to be blackmailed to stay. When Alexz figures out who Carrie Stevens is she fly's back to Riverview to be interrupted. This killer could it be the same as the one who killed Jill or is it someone they know very close ?



Book 5: Scream, My Love. Alexz goes missing but not before sending a tape to Brooke on who Carrie is. Carrie was a maniac who murdered her classmates only to be burned down by her parents in the same warehouse Brooke burned Jill's killer. Brooke finds a shocking trith.



Final Book: Overture. ( This Concludes the Scream Remake and is the final book that will include Brooke and Alexz.)

Brooke finds out her mother is actually Carrie Stevens is her mother. Carrie being 18 at the time of her death, had Jill first when she was 16 and 18 when she had Brooke. But Carrie had one more child . Brooke has a twin named Sidney Stevens. Brooke comes to battle with Sidney fighting for the mother they never had. Just when you think nothing can happen, one more blow is dealt to the both of them.



Possible Book 7 and 8. This would take a year after. Brooke and Sidney died during their fight. Then Ella Simms begins having dreams about this mysterious burned figure. That burned figure having been Carrie and she never died she escaped the deadly fire. This idea will last for two books and conclued the series forever with Brooke having a surprise appearance in Book 8 if i feel this series has spunk. Ella is having these dreams because her father is alsi Brooke;s father but they don't share the same mother. And Carrie will not stand for anyone in her family except her.

Carrie and her "unknown" partner married Carrie before she went psycho at the age of 16 but kept it a secret. When CARRIE died her partner had one more child before she becomes a orphan becasue her father dies of attempted suicide.

Book 7 will be called Nightmare ON Ella's Street

and Book 8 will be tentatively titled Nightmare On Halloween. As seven will remake nightmare on elm street and book 8 will remake John Carprenters Halloween.I reedited my book series all in one night so what do you think?You can't 'remake' Scream, Nightmare On Elm Street and Halloween as books without the copyright owners' permission. You can be inspired by them, but not 'remake' them. It's illegal. And don't call a maniacal teen who murdered her classmates 'Carrie'. Stephen King has already done that.



Also, you haven't 'reedited your book series'. You're just planning out your plots. 'Editing' is not the same as 'planning'. Editing is something completely different. Editing is when you go through a draft of your full manuscript and make changes to your text, not when you just start changing plot details at the planning stages.



Finally... this is all just an incoherent mess. It makes very little sense, and half the books have almost no plot at all.